Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)

I actually changed the whole thing about this post. so my character is Menma from Naruto The Movie: Road to Ninja. And I will poste my progress in here. Hope you guys enjoy it.




Standing:

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Walking:

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Running:

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Teleporting:

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Jumping:

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Hair and head need some work, neck looks...., the abs should be just lines, legs and arms are overall good, feet need some fixing, shading looks alright.

7/10

^ Mark said it all 7/10 for me too

the hair is meh...you should fix it, the head position isnt good, and legs' stance is abit strange, +shading even more man
i wont rate this until you make it awesome =]]~

8/10 looks better than your previous ones

Thanks guys, I'll try my best on improving it.

Here, Menma being hidden. Also in gif. [And yes this is from the same sprite]:

great animation, fluid stance

Yeah nice work.

@Rhino Thanks, the stance is suitable for this form of Menma.

@Mark Thanks tutor, learned it all from you.

Here is Menma from both sides:

Haha cool.

Pretty good but on the walking animation theres a random white dot that goes and then disappears you should fix that.

Okay good.

Okay cant wait.

Since the progress is slow due to school and such, I will try and complete menma as soon as possible. Putting all my strenght into it. So here he is in running mode [I will add the cape and the weapon later] :

Noone told me about it. Then I will stop advertising my work lol